Last elevator pitch, the feedback I got was that my hook might not have been very relatable with a lot of my audience and that I should maybe use a statistic which is what I did in this elevator pitch. I also practiced more.
It is neat that you decided to wear a UF jersey to show you’re a college student and connect with potential customers. It is clear that you practiced a lot more and the hook was very good showing the problem with how much student spend on textbooks. One thing you could do to improve is address the audience and ask them to think of how much they or someone they know spends on textbooks.
I think you really improved your pitch. You did a good job presenting your ideas and had reasonable voice control. I also agree that it was an excellent choice to wear a University of Florida jersey to show a connection to UF students. This an extra detail that can help you stand out when pitching to investors or entrepreneurs.
I think that your Pitch definitely got better from last time. You were well projected with your voice, seemed passionate about the subject, and seemed well educated on the subject. I think it was clever that you wore a university of Florida jersey to represent the population of who you would market to. I know that Chris advised to dress professional, but I think this is a great way of you doing so. It helps you be able to relate to your market. Great job!
It is neat that you decided to wear a UF jersey to show you’re a college student and connect with potential customers. It is clear that you practiced a lot more and the hook was very good showing the problem with how much student spend on textbooks. One thing you could do to improve is address the audience and ask them to think of how much they or someone they know spends on textbooks.
ReplyDeleteDear Maria,
ReplyDeleteI think you really improved your pitch. You did a good job presenting your ideas and had reasonable voice control. I also agree that it was an excellent choice to wear a University of Florida jersey to show a connection to UF students. This an extra detail that can help you stand out when pitching to investors or entrepreneurs.
Hey Maria!
ReplyDeleteI think that your Pitch definitely got better from last time. You were well projected with your voice, seemed passionate about the subject, and seemed well educated on the subject. I think it was clever that you wore a university of Florida jersey to represent the population of who you would market to. I know that Chris advised to dress professional, but I think this is a great way of you doing so. It helps you be able to relate to your market. Great job!