Hey Maria! Overall I think you did a great job. The opening statement was great but I feel like it can't be relevant to all students. Some are not broke. Instead, I think it woiuld be great to open with a statistic or story that represents how expensive textbooks are for students. I think you were well projected and the time was perfect at a minute and 22 seconds. You presented your idea well and clearly and did a great job at keeping it to the point. Great job!
I really liked your pitch. I think the structure of your pitch was well thought out, and you did a good job stating the problem and how this is a good solution for it. I think a lot of students would be interested in your product and the pitch really sells that point. Overall, I think with some revision, it could be pitched in front of investors.
I really like your idea and thing your pitch was good. You did a very good job keeping a smooth flow, and had very few stumbles, but it was good that you kept going and didn’t let little mistakes hold you back. You clearly defined the process and how the app will work, and feel that with a little more practice this elevator pitch could be perfect. I feel like one thing you could add would be personal experience, like say how much you previously overpaid for a textbook, or a time you couldn’t sell a textbook.
Hey Maria! Overall I think you did a great job. The opening statement was great but I feel like it can't be relevant to all students. Some are not broke. Instead, I think it woiuld be great to open with a statistic or story that represents how expensive textbooks are for students. I think you were well projected and the time was perfect at a minute and 22 seconds. You presented your idea well and clearly and did a great job at keeping it to the point. Great job!
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your pitch. I think the structure of your pitch was well thought out, and you did a good job stating the problem and how this is a good solution for it. I think a lot of students would be interested in your product and the pitch really sells that point. Overall, I think with some revision, it could be pitched in front of investors.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your idea and thing your pitch was good. You did a very good job keeping a smooth flow, and had very few stumbles, but it was good that you kept going and didn’t let little mistakes hold you back. You clearly defined the process and how the app will work, and feel that with a little more practice this elevator pitch could be perfect. I feel like one thing you could add would be personal experience, like say how much you previously overpaid for a textbook, or a time you couldn’t sell a textbook.
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